| Moonverse: alternate scene in Drowning |
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| 09:55pm 02/02/2004 |
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In the latter Moonverse stories, with the POV switching between James and Jack from scene to scene, I had a lot of opportunity to write from both perspectives to decide which one suited what I needed from the scene best. Sometimes I hated losing a few of the insights or observations that had to be sacrificed when choosing one and abandoning the other.
Initially the second scene in Drowning -- greeting Groves and co. on the Pearl -- was written from Norrington's POV, with slight differences in the meet-and-greet scenario. I decided Norrington was thinking too bloody much, so switched over to Jack. Who then went and thought too much. There's just no winning sometimes.
( And why oh why did morning have to start so early today? ) |
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